I like the general idea, but you want your render to stand out from the rest of it. But nice job =)

nice job. text and render could have been better. but im seeing much improvement from you.

yea, when i try to only get the render out from the black background or w/e, it always takes out some of the render itself, so i have to use the eraser to get rid of some black parts...and it looks like shit.

as for the text.... idc. xD

If you have that textured stuff everywhere apart from the spartan and the writing, it would look sexy.

I don't know how you made this I assume you didn't use the layers correctly. Learn layers and bring the render above the texture if you can.

nice

YeTi wrote:

comments? ( i know it's not good )

At least you know it

i like it needs some more defining but its cool