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1 been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:40 pm

wrath


I'm here way too much!

2 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:51 pm

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Nice man Smile


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3 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:02 pm

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nice job wrath Cool


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4 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:04 pm

beatles


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nice. better than my -newer- ones.

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5 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:55 pm

W!feY


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nice wrath.. pretty gnarly.. ew.

6 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:08 pm

wrath


I'm here way too much!
lawlz thnx guyz, ne feedback on how to make it better?

7 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:13 pm

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what part did you personally do? The only way to tell you what to make better is to know what parts you did.


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"Science adjusts it's views based on what's observed.... Faith is the denial of observation so that beliefs can be preserved."


*{CHS}* Putch: im bringing sexxy back
*pWp*T@D*: I brought it back. But you are more then welcomed to fluff it.

<-H$*SoStoned / Pillies -: whos your quake fun person of the year taddie bear?!?!??!
*pWp*T@D*: me... dipshit.
*pWp*T@D*: Im the fun
.
http://www.pwpclan.org

8 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:21 pm

wrath


I'm here way too much!
The background =o im rlly only good at makin backgrounds n puttin renders on them

9 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:29 pm

Kinsler


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NIce Cool

10 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:53 pm

Black


I'm here way too much!
Very nice Wrath !

11 Re: been a while on Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:24 pm

Ace


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n1 wrath aliens kick ass =o (so do predators lol)

12 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:27 am

wrath


I'm here way too much!
xD lol

13 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:46 am

beatles


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Lol.

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14 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:51 am

wrath


I'm here way too much!
?

15 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:19 pm

abuse


I Just got here!
want feedback?

-Text is very bad. use colors from the picture.
-Why is the alien's foot in the air..? (left side of the pic)
-Render(alien) takes too much room on the picture.
-Render looks like a sticker on top of the background
-No depth
-No Render/background interraction.
-Don't like the colors, but that's just me.
-No light source.
-What you tried to achieve by blurring the background and making the render pretty sharp.. didn't work out good :z

To add depth do some brushing on top of the render.
Create flow mostly by brushing aswell.
Add a lightsource with a soft bush.

Making sigs isn't just about putting an alien on a background. If you want to make the sig look good, you have to put at least some actions or something going on in the sig. in this case - the alien jumping at you is what should be going on.
I'd suggest you change the coloring of the picture since these colors are really REALLY horrid imho.

You can't just put a render on top of a blurred and distorted render copy and call it a sig :z
I'd be glad if you'd give it another shot and post up the result.
Good luck improving.

16 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:27 pm

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abuse wrote:want feedback?

-Text is very bad. use colors from the picture.
-Why is the alien's foot in the air..? (left side of the pic)
-Render(alien) takes too much room on the picture.
-Render looks like a sticker on top of the background
-No depth
-No Render/background interraction.
-Don't like the colors, but that's just me.
-No light source.
-What you tried to achieve by blurring the background and making the render pretty sharp.. didn't work out good :z

To add depth do some brushing on top of the render.
Create flow mostly by brushing aswell.
Add a lightsource with a soft bush.

Making sigs isn't just about putting an alien on a background. If you want to make the sig look good, you have to put at least some actions or something going on in the sig. in this case - the alien jumping at you is what should be going on.
I'd suggest you change the coloring of the picture since these colors are really REALLY horrid imho.

You can't just put a render on top of a blurred and distorted render copy and call it a sig :z
I'd be glad if you'd give it another shot and post up the result.
Good luck improving.


I Agree with some of this, but also disagree. Most of the bullet points are redundant. I believe there is an attempt at depth, hence the blur in the background.... It just isnt as apparent due to the size of the placed render..... But it is there. Personally, doing quite a bit more work in PS, munly large scale work, I disagree wityh brushing in any type of depth. Thats just myt personal opinion though. Depth can be created in many other more mnual ways.... same with light sources. Simple brushes may be the easy way, but less effective then vectoring levels and creating your own feel that no brush can duplicate.

As far as the coloring, I believe they "match too much". It does take away from the show peice if the background blends the render color style.

I agree with the text but when choosing a color that is involved as abuse said, I personally prefer using one of the small hinted colors, not something that is overly apparent already....again, It will make it blend.

The best way I've noticed to show someone what you mean isnt via text, So I will take this pic, make some changes and repost it if wrath dosent mind.... then explain what I did so maybe he can use it in the future.

Either way wrath, great job on your work... time will help you learn more and more Smile


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"Science adjusts it's views based on what's observed.... Faith is the denial of observation so that beliefs can be preserved."


*{CHS}* Putch: im bringing sexxy back
*pWp*T@D*: I brought it back. But you are more then welcomed to fluff it.

<-H$*SoStoned / Pillies -: whos your quake fun person of the year taddie bear?!?!??!
*pWp*T@D*: me... dipshit.
*pWp*T@D*: Im the fun
.
http://www.pwpclan.org

17 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:00 pm

beatles


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i give it a B+ plus...you dont usually make sigs, and its been a while. Nice job.

http://www.pwpclan.org

18 Re: been a while on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:53 pm

Po!son


Retired
Retired
I like it good job xD

19 Re: been a while on Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:57 pm

wrath


I'm here way too much!
lol thnx and thnx 4 teh suggestions. sure tad i'd love to see a visual Very Happy

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